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The recent edit: The "like" was important there. I read the previous version of this page as: "Like (that is, in the same way as) Gwladys Mims, the wife of Terpsic Mims, Geoffrey Indigo's wife was not too impressed either." Thoughts? --[[User:Lias Bluestone|Lias Bluestone]] ([[User talk:Lias Bluestone|talk]]) 05:41, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | The recent edit: The "like" was important there. I read the previous version of this page as: "Like (that is, in the same way as) Gwladys Mims, the wife of Terpsic Mims, Geoffrey Indigo's wife was not too impressed either." Thoughts? --[[User:Lias Bluestone|Lias Bluestone]] ([[User talk:Lias Bluestone|talk]]) 05:41, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
:It said "...the lake just as mysteriously refilled. like Gwladys Mims, his wife was not too impressed later." It doesn't make sense. How was Gwladys refilled? | :It said "...the lake just as mysteriously refilled. like Gwladys Mims, his wife was not too impressed later." It doesn't make sense. How was Gwladys refilled? Who else wasn't impressed? --[[User:Old Dickens|Old Dickens]] ([[User talk:Old Dickens|talk]]) 15:00, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
::Could be worded: "His wife [that is, Geoffrey Indigo's wife], for the same reason as Gwladys Mims, was not too impressed later." The way it reads makes it look as though Gwladys Mims is Geoffrey Indigo's wife. --[[User:Lias Bluestone|Lias Bluestone]] ([[User talk:Lias Bluestone|talk]]) 21:44, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | |||
:Ah. Even more confusing than I thought. --[[User:Old Dickens|Old Dickens]] ([[User talk:Old Dickens|talk]]) 23:10, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | |||
Latest revision as of 23:10, 29 August 2018
The recent edit: The "like" was important there. I read the previous version of this page as: "Like (that is, in the same way as) Gwladys Mims, the wife of Terpsic Mims, Geoffrey Indigo's wife was not too impressed either." Thoughts? --Lias Bluestone (talk) 05:41, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- It said "...the lake just as mysteriously refilled. like Gwladys Mims, his wife was not too impressed later." It doesn't make sense. How was Gwladys refilled? Who else wasn't impressed? --Old Dickens (talk) 15:00, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- Could be worded: "His wife [that is, Geoffrey Indigo's wife], for the same reason as Gwladys Mims, was not too impressed later." The way it reads makes it look as though Gwladys Mims is Geoffrey Indigo's wife. --Lias Bluestone (talk) 21:44, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- Ah. Even more confusing than I thought. --Old Dickens (talk) 23:10, 29 August 2018 (UTC)