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The recent edit: The "like" was important there. I read the previous version of this page as: "Like (that is, in the same way as) Gwladys Mims, the wife of Terpsic Mims, Geoffrey Indigo's wife was not too impressed either." Thoughts? --[[User:Lias Bluestone|Lias Bluestone]] ([[User talk:Lias Bluestone|talk]]) 05:41, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | The recent edit: The "like" was important there. I read the previous version of this page as: "Like (that is, in the same way as) Gwladys Mims, the wife of Terpsic Mims, Geoffrey Indigo's wife was not too impressed either." Thoughts? --[[User:Lias Bluestone|Lias Bluestone]] ([[User talk:Lias Bluestone|talk]]) 05:41, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
:It said "...the lake just as mysteriously refilled. like Gwladys Mims, his wife was not too impressed later." It doesn't make sense. How was Gwladys refilled? Gwladys ''is'' his wife. Who else wasn't impressed? --[[User:Old Dickens|Old Dickens]] ([[User talk:Old Dickens|talk]]) 15:00, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | :It said "...the lake just as mysteriously refilled. like Gwladys Mims, his wife was not too impressed later." It doesn't make sense. How was Gwladys refilled? Gwladys ''is'' his wife. Who else wasn't impressed? --[[User:Old Dickens|Old Dickens]] ([[User talk:Old Dickens|talk]]) 15:00, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
::Could be worded: "His wife [that is, Geoffrey Indigo's wife], for the same reason as Gwladys Mims, was not too impressed later." The way it reads makes it look as though Gwladys Mims is Geoffrey Indigo's wife. --[[User:Lias Bluestone|Lias Bluestone]] ([[User talk:Lias Bluestone|talk]]) 21:44, 29 August 2018 (UTC) | |||
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The recent edit: The "like" was important there. I read the previous version of this page as: "Like (that is, in the same way as) Gwladys Mims, the wife of Terpsic Mims, Geoffrey Indigo's wife was not too impressed either." Thoughts? --Lias Bluestone (talk) 05:41, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- It said "...the lake just as mysteriously refilled. like Gwladys Mims, his wife was not too impressed later." It doesn't make sense. How was Gwladys refilled? Gwladys is his wife. Who else wasn't impressed? --Old Dickens (talk) 15:00, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- Could be worded: "His wife [that is, Geoffrey Indigo's wife], for the same reason as Gwladys Mims, was not too impressed later." The way it reads makes it look as though Gwladys Mims is Geoffrey Indigo's wife. --Lias Bluestone (talk) 21:44, 29 August 2018 (UTC)